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Commander_[Anita Mui]


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Date: Dec 8 4:41 AM, 2007
Writing a story
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Once upon a time, there is a guy called Commander_[Anita Mui]......

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Makelevi


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Date: Dec 8 10:33 AM, 2007
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...who's name had a bracket...

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The_Protagonist


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Date: Dec 8 11:42 AM, 2007
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...with an unnecessary underscore...

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Commander_[Anita Mui]


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Date: Dec 9 4:25 AM, 2007
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...likes Jewel Of The Palace. One day, he found himself in the Jang Geum Palace when suddenly...

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...along came the president...

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Commander_[Anita Mui]


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Date: Dec 10 1:28 AM, 2007
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...and the Palace Girls. Commander_[Anita Mui] now take out his M4A1 rifle, and he start to aim at the president(Must be Korean King) when a nurse come out from the palace and said that the nearby towns have been attacked by a virus, which turns all the people there into zombies...

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Date: Dec 10 2:16 AM, 2007
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the zombies attack commander_anita mui and he goes berserk, kill all the zombies!

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Commander_[Anita Mui]


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Date: Dec 10 5:37 AM, 2007
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Unfortunaly, the zombies went alive again(Reinforced too). This time not only attack Commander_[Anita Mui], but everyone including the king, queen, palace girls and the soldiers...

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Date: Dec 10 2:04 PM, 2007
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the soldiers unleash their most powerful weapon...

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Commander_[Anita Mui]


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Date: Dec 11 4:29 AM, 2007
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...however, their "most powerful" weapons are for noobs only(Just knifes and Bow/Arrows, but no rifles). So very fast, the zombies kills all the soldiers. The king, queen, palace nurses and the palace girls escape, leaving the whole palace, and Commander_[Anita Mui] facing the zombies with his M4A1 rifle alone...

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Date: Dec 11 5:52 PM, 2007
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But the rifle runs out of ammo, and CAM is forced to use a detonator...

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Commander_[Anita Mui]


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Date: Dec 12 1:38 AM, 2007
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...The detonator is out of order too. As CAM only got a M4A1, so he escape with the others, leaving the zombie conquer the palace, and kill everyone who is alive inside. Suddenly, a palace girl comes out from the escaping team. To CAM's surprise, her face looks extremely like Metal-Geo...

-- Edited by Commander_[Anita Mui] at 04:41, 2007-12-12

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space invader stand on the sidewalk and says O_O"

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Commander_[Anita Mui]


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Date: Dec 13 1:29 AM, 2007
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Then the zombies kills him, and the "Metal-Geo" palace girl gives Commander_[Anita Mui] something, which is a.......

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a brand new hover car

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what the hell?!
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